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"The Importance of Communicating Your Biggest Benefit With Your Headline - How You Dramatically Increase Overall Sales"
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"Use The Most Valuable Benefit, or Real Estate on Your Web
Site to Capture Your Visitors' Attention
in 10 Seconds or Less!"
Just like in spy movies where the hero has 10 suspense-
filled seconds to dispose of his or her latest assignment
before it self-destructs, you have an equally short 10
seconds to grab your visitors' attention before your
chances of making a sale self-destruct... and your
first-time visitors leave your site forever.
Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to make
those critical 10 seconds count by ensuring that the first
fold of your web site (the first screen of your web site
visible without scrolling) snags the attention of your
visitors with a compelling benefit that persuades them to
stay just a few minutes longer to find out what you're
offering.
What's Up With This 10-Second Rule, Anyway?
The first fold is literally the most valuable real estate on
your web site because this is the screen that your visitors
absorb during the first 10 seconds of their visit and use to
make their "should I stay or should I go" decision. That's
why you'll frequently hear me refer to "the 10-second rule."
The first fold of your web site needs to be strategically
designed so that, in 10 seconds or less, it clearly
communicates the biggest, most compelling benefit you
have to offer your visitors.
I know this concept probably sounds simple enough; however,
most web site owners make fatal mistakes here that drive
visitors away and limit the sales potential of their sites.
In the process of trying to "tell it all"... "sell it all"
... or "dazzle `em all," they just end up "confusing `em
all." Or they assume that their web site will sell the
offer itself and don't provide any information.
Think about all of those times you've arrived at web sites
that:
- Overwhelm you with graphics
- Point you in 14 different directions with links here,
there, and everywhere
- Annoy you with flashy banners
- Slow you down with long, pointless Flash presentations
- Spend the entire first page talking about "Mission
Statements"
- And just plain drive you away with a lack of relevant
information
We've all been to (and been frustrated by) these sites. So
what can you do to ensure that your site isn't one of them?
Communicate Your Biggest Benefit With Your Headline
Any professional copywriter will tell you that your headline
can make or break your success. Unfortunately, this is an
element that is sorely undervalued by most site owners.
The very first thing that should draw the eyes of your
visitors when they arrive at your web site is a headline
that clearly states the biggest benefit your site has to
offer. Graphics, logos, illustrations, menus, links,
etc... should never overpower or distract from this
critical element.
Your headline should be located at the very top, center of
the page in a larger font size that naturally attracts
attention. It should communicate information about what
you offer and how you're going to:
- Make visitors' lives easier
- Save them money
- Save them time
- Help them in their personal lives
- Provide additional income
- Entertain them
- Make them more attractive
- Help them feel better
Plus, it should be visually appealing. For your headline to
be most effective, your visitors must be able to absorb the
benefits it shares in a glance. So you not only need to
write a killer headline, you need to strategically format
it!
To illustrate these points, let's pretend that you're
brainstorming headlines for your web site that sells
plastic cutlery (i.e. plastic knives, forks, and
spoons):
Headline #1:
"Welcome to PlasticCutlery.net"
COMMENTS: Your domain name should NEVER be used as your
title. It doesn't communicate a benefit or give visitors
a reason to stay.
Headline #2:
"Buy Our Perfect Picnic Pals"
COMMENTS: You know what this means, but your visitors
won't. Are you selling bug spray? Wine? Picnic baskets?
Friends to picnic with? Visitors should never have to read
through your site to understand your title. The benefit
should be clear to everyone immediately.
Headline #3:
"Stick A Plastic Fork In It When It's Done"
COMMENTS: Don't worry about being clever, worry about
being clear. While cute slogans might be fun to write,
be careful that they're doing more than amuse -- make
sure they're selling visitors on why your site is worth
their time.
Headline #4:
"Durable Plastic Nourishment Ingesting Utensils Comprised
Of Plasticizers, Fillers, Pigments, And Other Additives"
COMMENTS: Huh? Speak in a language that your target market
is going to understand. You're only impressing yourself by
overusing big words in long, complicated sentences. Good
writing is clear and concise. So are good headlines.
Headline #5:
"Choose From Our Wide Selection Of Brand Name Plastic Cutlery
(Over 200 Tested, Proven Durable Styles)... Including The
Top 10 Patterns The Hollywood Stars Use"
COMMENTS: Now I admit that this last headline is a bit
of a stretch, but if you are in the market for designer
plastic utensils, these might be the major benefits you
are looking for. Notice that this headline clearly
expresses benefits like:
a) Choose from a wide selection of plastic cutlery
(over 200 styles)...
b) Choose from brand name cutlery...
c) And choose from patterns the stars use.
Now if you were formatting this headline in HTML, you'd
want to carefully use centering and line breaks, along
with bolding, italics, and brackets, to place special
emphasis on certain words and phrases that make it
easier to read in a glance.
This is how you make the benefits in your carefully
written headline jump out at your visitors.
Capture Visitors Names And E-mail Addresses
The next critical element that should appear within the
first fold of your web site is an opt-in e-mail form that
offers visitors a compelling reason to become a subscriber.
Not every person is going to buy from you the first time
they visit your site, so it's very important that you
capture their names and e-mail addresses before they leave.
You've spent the time, money, and energy getting your site
listed in the search engines, recruiting link partners,
purchasing advertising in industry newsletters, writing
free promotional articles, etc... Why would you let these
targeted visitors slip away?
Of course, these days including an opt-in e-mail form with
text like "Subscribe Now" or "Free Newsletter" is not
enough.
E-mail is no longer a novelty for most people, and there
are literally thousands of sites pushing their "free"
newsletters. So it's extremely important that you give your
visitors a compelling reason to share their names and e-mail
addresses.
For example, referring back to the plastic cutlery web site,
a good subscription offer might read something like this:
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Subscribe to our FREE monthly "Plastic Cutlery" Newsletter
and learn the secrets Hollywood stars use to throw some of
the hottest, most talked-about parties... for almost no cost!
PLUS, Subscribe today, and you'll immediately receive our
exclusive report, "10 Secrets About Buying In Bulk That
Plastic Cutlery Manufacturers Don't Want You To Know!"
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Notice that you're not only letting visitors know that
their subscription will be free, you're telling them exactly
what your newsletter is about, how frequently they'll be
receiving it, and how they're going to benefit from it.
Plus, you're giving them the added incentive of a special
bonus report that contains information they're going to
value (and that's going to establish your credibility!).
Make Getting Around Easy With Your Navigation Menu
The other critical element that should appear within the
first fold of your web site is your navigation menu, which
should be placed somewhere on the top, left of every page.
When visitors first arrive at your site, they should be
able to see in a glance that your site is going to be easy
to navigate.
If your visitors are struggling to get around, then they're
not thinking about your offer. And if they're not thinking
about your offer, they're going to leave! So rather than
scatter links around your homepage, group them together in
a concise menu that's easy to understand and use.
I should point out that part of making your navigation menu
easy to use involves carefully choosing your menu button
names. For example, a poorly labeled menu on your plastic
cutlery site might look something like this:
- What's Cool
- Meet Bob
- Statistics
- Background
- Product
Notice that none of these buttons give the visitor information
about how they're going to benefit from clicking on them. This
is a very common mistake. Don't assume that your visitors
will instinctively know what these buttons mean. Choose
compelling link and button names that are both benefit-
oriented and clear!
A better menu might look something like this:
- Home
- FREE Plastic Cutlery
- Hollywood Star Favorites
- 200 Cutlery Designs
- Cutlery Care Tips
- About Us
- Contact Us
Notice that each of these menu options clearly tells the
visitor where they're going to go or what they're going to
get by clicking on them.
Avoid These Common Design Errors
Once you understand the key elements that should immediately
grab your visitors' attention within the first fold of your
web site, the elements to avoid become obvious:
#1: Avoid Links And Banners That Drive Traffic Away From
Your Offer
Be careful not to drive traffic away from your web site
with distracting banners and links. While there are some
situations that warrant placing a banner at the top of your
homepage (i.e. you're promoting an affiliate product or
you're selling your advertising space), you need to make
sure you're not driving your traffic right into the hands
of your competition.
For example, if you're selling books about plastic cutlery,
you shouldn't have a link to Amazon.com at the top of your
homepage. Amazon.com is a HUGE, well-established bookseller
that has already established its credibility with online
book buyers.
If you present your visitors with the choice of purchasing
their plastic cutlery books from you or Amazon.com, they're
likely going to choose Amazon.com.
Think carefully before placing any links or banners within
the first fold of your web site; this is where you should be
directing visitors towards your offer, not away from your
site!
#2: Avoid Distracting Graphics And Animation
Words sell, not graphics.
So if visitors spend the first 10 seconds at your site trying to figure out how to make your long Flash presentation stop, or waiting for large graphics to load, you can be sure that they're not going to stick
around.
While there is a time and place for graphics and animation,
be certain that if you've chosen to include any on your site,
you've done so to strategically enhance your message and
illustrate a benefit -- not for your own self-gratification.
Your friends and family will be far more impressed by the
long-term profits your site generates than by flashy,
spinning images.
#3: Avoid Sharing Ordering Information Too Soon
While your product type and offer will ultimately dictate
how you lead your visitors to the sale, it's generally a
good idea to avoid any mention of ordering or buying until
you've established the value of your offer as this tends to
scare people away.
Like any good salesperson, you first need to establish your
credibility and explain how your product or service is going
to benefit the visitor before asking for the order.
#4: Avoid "About You" Text Like Mission Statements
Here's a personal pet peeve of mine. Sites that seem intent
on boring you to death with long, elaborate pages that talk
about company goals and mission statements.
Think about it for a minute... A mission statement is about
what your company wants to achieve, not about how your
visitors are going to benefit from doing business with you.
Yes, in some cases these benefits may be implied in your
mission statement. But you can't honestly expect your
visitors to wade through all of your pomp and ceremony to
figure out how you're going to help them.
If you MUST include this information on your site, don't
place it in the first fold of your homepage where visitors
are looking for clear, specific details about why your site
is worth their time.
Final Thoughts
The first fold is the most valuable real estate on your web
site because this is where new visitors make their 10-second
decision to stay or go.
That's why you need to side-step the tempting design errors
like misplaced banners, distracting animation, wordy mission
statements, and premature ordering information, and use this
space to carefully:
1) Communicate the biggest benefit your web site has to
offer,
2) Persuade your visitors to opt-in to your mailing list,
3) And convince them that your site will be a breeze to
navigate.
This is how you'll not only dramatically increase the
average length of a visitor's stay, it's how you'll also
dramatically increase your overall sales!

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